Hey, man. I apologize for taking so long to reply, but thanks for sharing this poem! I enjoy the allegorical components. It’s good. However, I feel like it neglects God’s redemptive nature - ie his redemptive work through Christ’s death, resurrection and return, and through the Spirit. That may be due to the fact that it’s a reworking of Zephaniah, though. Any who, thanks brother, I enjoyed it.